Putting the Jar of Grape Juice Back
The white sheen of this cap
could be dreams of winter in Chicago
when a walker along Lake Michigan gazes
across the tamed waters in sunlight
that speaks of early dusk.
Its ridged edges could be a memory
of tractor tracks at the childhood farm,
where chickadees sang each morning the same way
since the first day of care.
But when I slide the furrows of its inner casing
into the lines that once held it tight,
it is just a blind act, where the light of a face
from giving and taking is a recollection
for more silent days.
Saturday, December 19, 2009
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I love how you write about something ordinary and make a whole poem out of it.
"The white sheen of this cap
could be dreams of winter in Chicago when a walker along Lake Michigan gazes across the tamed waters in sunlight that speaks of early dusk."
I love the ending too.
"it is just a blind act, where the light of a face from giving and taking is a recollection for more silent days."
When you say "a recollection for more silent days" it kind of puts you into a meditation.
Very nice. I love it. I'm inspired to write more now! much love, jake
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